Rise Up

The Fight Of Good And Evil

The army is ready
Each one standing halt
As they stare down the battle field
And praying to their god.

They bow their heads as one
Kneeling to the ground
Voices in a chant, words a different tongue
They arise.

One man leads their way
Dressed in a mere white robe
He is no warrior in this battle
Knowing the ground will be covered in blood.

Their enemies, sharp knives and bows
Each one a murderer, a liar, and a cheater
Ganging up with their sins
Hands ready for the kill.

Two kings on their thrones
One in a blessed light
The other in cursed agony
Both looking forward to the armies' death.

Which one would fall to the ground?
The last man standing tall
Who's victory will reign?
And rule the world with an iron fist.

One to rule it all
One to destroy it all
And one to look down
And cry for those unfortunate.

Rise up
And take their king's armor with faith
Rise up
And stare down those who do not believe.

Reviews

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

Well. I'm not a fan of religion, but this is well written.
"Their enemies, sharp knives and bows
Each one a murderer, a liar, and a cheater
Ganging up with their sins
Hands ready for the kill."
I like this. Shows how violent people are these days. you tell it point-blank. No sugar-coating. Nice flow and imagery. Good write(:

[Broken Hearted Faux]

Thanks all of you guys ^^

[Sarah Nicole Nadler]

wow, a real war of religion! I think all of us who fight for our religious freedom will like this

[Dark Angel ~]

0.0... Um... WOW!

[EMF]

Real nice flow and crafting. Got a good style and theme. Makes me want to read a bit more

[J.Truth]

this.is.AMAZING.

[ClaireBear]

so great! sad, but great!

[Solitary Dreamer]

Awesome peom:)