Lust Wins Out

Haiku written for a contest

Toes curled in delight

Virtue gone this summer night

Lust trumphs chasity

Reviews

[The Flawed]

To me this is not a poem, it's more a very vivid photograph, of a moment in our lives that we would never forget, the moment that we automatically think about when we hear the word LUST, of course this image is very different for each of us, but your words conjure up these moments brilliantly in just three lines.
But what do I know?

[Brianna Brie]

Hmmm....you have captured the spirit of lust in just a few words. Nicely done in red as it adds to the passion. Kudos!

[Jason]

Amen. In many ways, and many situations, Lust wins. Great peice!

[.::ethereal::.]

Again, beautifully captured. Isn't it great how Haiku makes you focus on one direct thing and trying to find the most concise of words in order to convey the emotion you hope to capture?

[kate _wolves]

your way of choosing words is so nice !!really awesome !!

[Meredith Leigh]

I likw how short and true it was. I thought it was great, and I loved your wording!

- Kriss

[Matthew]

haha, great haiku! i'll have to show this to a few of my friends, tho they'll prolly murder me, it sums up their lives quite well.

[Anita B Jacques]

Nice, I like it, I needed that after reading a list of sad poems, life and pleasure still exist, Thank you my friend for sharing a great write.