Broken

Not your happy little haiku.......

Inviscerate me

Toss my heart on frozen ground

Blood soaked mortal wound

Reviews

[The Flawed]

Good Stuff

[Jaeda]

Thanks for the submission.

Wow, that was terribly depressing for something like a haiku's limited lines.

[Fran Marie]

Great Haiku~THanks for sharing in the contest~Fran

[Your Victim]

I have never been a particular fan of haiku, yet this absolutely blew me away. You managed to capture so much deep emotion in so few words... I cannot think of anything else to say. This piece is mind-boggling. Very, very pleasant.

[Hisou_Tenshi]

Small and powerful. Like a sparkly gemstone. You did a good job with compressing and expressing so much pain into three lines.

[Jinx's Heart]

I especially like this one. So straight forward with artistic understanding. Thank you for looking at my work, too.

[Anita B Jacques]

Wow, so visual, with few words you are telling a whole story, great write my friend, thank you for sharing this awesome write. God Bless you

your friend....Annie

[John A Common]

Powerfull stuff. Excellent haiku.

[Kari Fernandez]

Whoa. This is really good. A lot of emotion packed into a haiku; you don't see that a lot. Nice job!