Searching for Mercy

...another attempt at Haiku while coping with some of life's tickles

 

Touch my wounded skin

On the winter of my soul

Heal my broken heart

 

 

Reviews

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Stunning.

[Alaska Frost]

Great haiku! Thanks for sharing!! Good luck in my contest!!!! :)
-Alaska

[hoyt]

Your attempt was a success!...the feeling simple and beautifully put..very nice haiku

[Robert Francis Callaci]

beautifuly expressed- it created a touching image...

my warmest
bob

[Hisou_Tenshi]

I really like it. Short, but so beautiful. So magically accurate.

[Sheila Kline]

And your attempt is well done!........love the term winter of my soul! I can relate to it.
At times, it takes but one word to convey a book of thoughts, and I see these words as such an instance.
Sheila