Wildflowers in a Mason Jar

My attempt at Haiku

 

 

 

I give my virtue

For wildflowers in a jar

A colorful sin

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Enjoyable Haiku...got to love them. They are just a snippet of creativity!

[Alaska Frost]

Hey, good job! Thanks for sharing!! Good luck in my contest!!!
-Alaska

[Salvatore Buttaci]

That's a good haiku. First of all, the image is easy to see in the reader's mind. My only suggestion would be to keep the verb in the present tense since haiku require that.

Sal

[Fidheallir]

I like that this poem is like a very short story. The reader gets to extrapolate a whole scenario from one tiny image. There is something light and playful about using a few well-chosen words.

[Sheila Kline]

Again, creative, and well done. I like the terminology of wildflowers in a jar.
Sheila

[Journey]

I liked it. It was short and simple, hence it's a haiku. Your title really interested me and it didn't disappoint me. Good job! :)