Reincarnation

 

 

 

My aching, searching soul longed for you

Before we knew that we crossed lives before

Somewhere in the great unknown, the great universal mass

Our souls had traveled the dark spaces as one

Dancing around the light and bouncing off the stars

Threading rainbows after the rain

Two souls becoming as one

As if eternity will not last

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[Cher Guevara]

This is cool! Cosmic imagery is used well and the poem sums up things well without being too long, I like

[Rebecca Rogers]

The imagery was terrific!! I love the idea of two people destined to be together over time, conquering anything that blocks their path. Nice work! :))

[John A Common]

I really like the imagery of this one. Excellent poem.

[C.J.]

wow this was arealy good write the line two souls becoming as one was my favorite.

[Anita B Jacques]

I love your poem, rainbows and Souls are two of my favorite words, good write.God Bless

Anita

[Ralphy]

Bravo, this piece gives me hope and makes me smile. To think that it's true, to travel around with that special one. A soul mate, that shares my views, and spontaneously connects�breathtaking

[Robert Francis Callaci]

A heartfelt poem- Love the message that True Love last through eternity- This made me smile...


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[Petrus Romanus]

Are you aware of the double meaning of 'universal mass'? The word 'catholic' also means 'universal'!

[Michael X]

this is beautifully written with sentimental, timeless hertfelt imagery that brings the meaning to life in the readers heart, lovely and romantically classic.