Loneliness

I place another brick

On the barrier you can't see

I'm sorry but I can't

Let you witness this side of me

Soon it will be over

Then you'll finally see

Befriending me was a mistake

Just watch, in the end you'll be happy

I'm the dead weight

The burden holding you back

The misery in your heart

The emptiness you can't fill

As you draw near

I cautiously take two steps back

Until I'm too far deep

And I fall

Into this abyss called loneliness

To rot for the rest of my days

While I physically withstand the flames of hell's fires

But I feel it scorching my body

Praying for it to turn me into ash

So this cruel punishment can stop filling Satan's delight

Reviews

[Eryn ♪]

Woah, this is pretty deep, and I feel it can really connect with the reader (at least myself) the way one feels when they are lonely. Great job.

[AliceWithAButterflySoul]

thank you :) it's great to know that i achieved what i was aiming for :) Thanks for your response!