A Raped Women's Heartbreak

I stare in the mirror
Put my hand to my face
As tears slip out
Revealing a path of kisses you placed

I punch that mirror
Pull the shattered piece out my hand
As the blood trickles down
I feel less than I actually am

I look back in the mirror
Wanting to change what I see
You stupid f*****g sinner
You changed every part of me

You got away with it
You took what was mine
I feel hopeless and restless
I wish I could go back in time

Reviews

[Bowers]

ouch, that hurt to read. How vivid the picture was, the emotion raw within your words. And it makes me think about that simple question again, why? don't you wonder what we are really looking at when we glance in the mirror, are we seeing our hearts, or are we looking at the mask we put on every day?

[AliceWithAButterflySoul]

Thank you for your beautiful insightful comment. It's amazing how we captured the same concept of "why" throughout our two different pieces, and I think I shall put up a poem soon about looking in the mirror and putting on the daily "mask."

[Bowers]

your welcome! I agree, how strange it is that we've thought about the same issues but our insights bring out different points of views and our ways of using words are different, yet still the same.. and I would love to read that poem after you write it, I can't wait!

[PhillipHamilton]

Great. Really emotional and heartbreaking. I love it! :)

[AliceWithAButterflySoul]

Thank you so much ^.^