Wide Awake

Darkness upon my soul's horizon,

Rumbling thunder echoes deep.

Letting it all go with every flash,

Like an unborn child, I open my eyes.

 

Falling, crashing at a slow pace,

From the highest clouds above.

Trying to answer the riddles,

Subliminal messages within a vast universe.

 

I've opened the book of my heart

Letting in all that choose to understand.
Building up my mighty castle walls

To have them crumbling at my feet.

 

Only heaven knows that I tried

With every dark tunnel there is light

Waiting to greet me on the other side,

I am wide awake now....Finally I can see.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Written for the sake of having not written anything in awhile. May not make much sense to my readers but from what I have experienced lately, it speaks to me.

Reviews

[MandaBear]

Amazing work. :) Keep it up

[LilMissWriter17]

Amazing :) Your poems are always beautiful!

[KAREN]

Awesome work, I believe it speaks to all readers!

[Fate]

great job!..what a nice piece huh..keep it up!!..

[Priscilla Sayers]

Empowering. A wonderful piece that shows the struggle to awaken the soul.

[Hatchling]

Beautifully written

[Tarry Franck]

Absolutely beautifully done - great job hun

[Enigma]

"Only heaven knows that I tried

With every dark tunnel there is light

Waiting to greet me on the other side,

I am wide awake now....Finally I can see. " - My favourite lines. beautifully penned. :)

[Winter]

"I've opened the book of my heart
Letting in all that choose to understand." Loved this!!!
Nicely done.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great job ! It is sincere and full of pathos, it looks like something halfway of being a confession and a reminder to yourself about how you're feeling etc ...
I enjoyed reading it, keep it up, girl !! =D