I Hate Love

Tired of these blowing winds,

Blowing heavily in my direction

Causing me to fall so deep into the abyss of love

Once more poisoning my heart in bittersweet bliss.

 

Beautifully scented words like a rose,

The sweet smell of aromas that linger

Arousing my senses as I fall...

While I desperately hold onto my dreams.

 

Caught in a web of ecstasy and paradise,

Innocence overwhelms me again.

I open the envelope of my burning heart

And let myself go, opening myself to you.

 

You have stolen the spirit of me,

Burying my hope and dreams in your kiss.

My thoughts that this could be a miracle drift

Perishing in the shadows of my aching darkness.

 

 

I HATE LOVE.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can always get us. Even when we desire to hide. It can surprise us at any time and make us dream and hope again. Thank you for the nice verses of love and the very good ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[thehottamale]

I loved the imagery in this one, well done!

[Renée]

You hit it on the head! ...Love the constant roller coaster we all ride ..

[MandaBear]

I also agree with coyote poetry

[zero binty]

I hate love too, but it's just superficial. All the hurt one has to go through just to find true love is a test of sorts. Just think of it as a way to know what you don't like in a relationship so that when the one person who does none of those things comes along, you can begin the next chapter.

[MusicLover]

I love the poem

I also agree with coyote poetry

[earthtohannah]

I love this, I think it's beautiful

[bunmal]

No matter how long you've known and experienced love, no one really knows anything about it. Love is different for everyone. Some love it, and some hate it. But the cons of love, to me, seem to always outweigh the pros. Love is almost like a temporary happiness until it crumbles, and you no longer want to be a part of it. But I'm sure that if you meet the right person later on, love can be a wonderful thing! :) You've written an amazing poem. All the lines are worded flawlessly, and some of these metaphors are brilliant. Well done!

[Enigma]

Nothing can better convey my present thoughts than this. I can relate to each an every word of your poem. I do hate love because as beautiful as it seems, there exist a lot of hidden storms underneath its flimsy cover. Well penned. :)

[Wondering Mind]

Love is a killer that lets us live...Beautifully phrased in fine expression.

[Tarry Franck]

Wonderful write!! Very well expressed!