I Hate Love

Tired of these blowing winds,

Blowing heavily in my direction

Causing me to fall so deep into the abyss of love

Once more poisoning my heart in bittersweet bliss.

 

Beautifully scented words like a rose,

The sweet smell of aromas that linger

Arousing my senses as I fall...

While I desperately hold onto my dreams.

 

Caught in a web of ecstasy and paradise,

Innocence overwhelms me again.

I open the envelope of my burning heart

And let myself go, opening myself to you.

 

You have stolen the spirit of me,

Burying my hope and dreams in your kiss.

My thoughts that this could be a miracle drift

Perishing in the shadows of my aching darkness.

 

 

I HATE LOVE.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love can always get us. Even when we desire to hide. It can surprise us at any time and make us dream and hope again. Thank you for the nice verses of love and the very good ending. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[A Soap Mess Stories]

It can be hard to know when love is right....

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Well written! Love can be a wonderful feelinf or it can be bittersweet or plain out painful!

[Lily Mae]

And yet we crave it so.. and it will happen again and again.. The lessons sink in and we learn and then when least expected it knocks on our doors and we actually answer..xo :)

[Lily]

I'm loving your poems more and more
you have a type of Dark feeling in them
:)

[ROSALIND]

perfect way of describing your thought's excellent write some more

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Tricky, it's one of those things that we can ponder for eternity and never understand, great piece.

[Jed Sabffle]

Even we hate love... we can't stop loving.
You will just realized one day that you already fell in love even you don't want to.
Well, that's love...very complicated..

the poem is really awesome. you used nice words.
and i like the way you described love.

nice piece. thanks for sharing. :)

[Heromen Selena]

Oxymoron :) Love is always followed by hate. It's no wonder why you found yourself hating the thing you love.

[hopelessromantic]

i love it dont give up on love

[Ink Angel]

Beautifully scented words like a rose, such lovely imagery. Love certainly has a way of creeping up on us. This is a wonderful write. Thankyou.