Dust

Dust

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
"

Forgotten unfinished writes that might never be finished.

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Milford Sound in New Zealand

 

 

 

 

Words penned on blank pages,

Softly spoken voices whisper

In the shadows within the coolness

Of a breeze caressing my cheeks.

 

Empty broken thoughts

Gone astray, never to seek life.

Reincarniation of timeless memories

Faded photographs engraved in my heart.

 

Sad melodies linger in the blackness,

Tales of love and laughter gone untold.

Imaginations that soared the horizons

Above and beyond universal skies.

 

Cautiously, I swipe the dust away

As I wonder if words once penned

Will ever find the chance to heard

For now, I wish them all a goodnight.

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


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I enjoyed reading your work(:
its good!..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nicely done my friend. Full of heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice write. As writers, we all know the feeling embodied by this poem. Brought a wistful, nostalgic smile to my face. Thank you :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautifully written, and the imagery gives the reader a perfect picture of the poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very nicely written and the definition is well put out. You truly have a way with words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is priceless, the imagery is so delicate, and I love the end. Thankyou

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is brilliant the natural blue nature of words and imagery fit the ethos of this poem very well

Posted 12 Years Ago


amazing, amazing, amazing, AMAZING .... Have i told you it's amazing? xD
It looks like you simply left your soul speak, but i can see you worked hard on it, great lexic, great metrica, great images spread all over the poem and you described perfectly a not-so-simple theme, there're lot of writings i start but never finishes, i wanted to write a poem for them ... well, i'm glad i didn't, because it wouldn't ever get any closer to the grandeur of this one :) One of my favourite poems, so far :)

PS: just a tip: stop putting images, your poems don't need'em !! They are incredibly beautiful even alone, they don't need to share the spotlight with any images :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is beautiful, i love the opening.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful write..so true !

Posted 12 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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