Disturbia

My sleepless nights.

Shivering spine tingles with fright

Knock, knocking on my chamber door.

The dance of fright and be afraid

Shadows waltz upon the walls.

 

Insanity rages in serpeant's delight

Abducted by the fear of glowing eyes

Chains and burning needles

Stinging claws that scratch against skin.

 

The jackyll's hysterical laughter,

Echoes through my mind as I try hard

To return to some sense of reality

A calming dreamland that awaits me.

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the description of trying to find sleep. I like the description of wild thoughts and places.
"The dance of fright and be afraid
Shadows waltz upon the walls."
Good to find sleep. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dayran]

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[Amila Jay]

Scrumptious write!! love the poem indeed! Awesome work :)

[Heromen Selena]

Waiting and waiting for peace to come. That's what this reminds me of. You gave me goose bumps in the beginning and made me understand at the end. Very nice.

[MusicLover]

Absolutely charming :)

[R.A. Youngblood]

"Shivering spine tingles with fright
Knock, knocking on my chamber door.
The dance of fright and be afraid
Shadows waltz upon the walls."

This is very imaginative and creative.. I really like this..
In so many ways, it's wonderful!
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up! :D

[Lovely Soul]

This has wonderful imagery and wording. I really like it.

[Raven Starhawk]

Such...I don't know. ^^* Lovely way of creating something to remember. It feels like forever since I found a poem like this. It opens my eyes and keep me in tune to hope and...well I am getting side tracked I think but I adore this and your work.

[MandaBear]

Amazing imagery. Beautifully written

[luna11]

Woah!
Amazing imagery. Beautifully written. I have a lot of sleepless nights, too.
Well done!

[The Flame of the Knight]

I like it. Is is very good, but i wouldnt have minded it being a little bit longer. But still it is very good.