Remember Me

First loves are mostly always the ones that are the most memorable.

And let the ocean waves speak

Whispering the words

I hold deep within my soul for you.

 

Do you remember the love we shared

So long ago when the world gazed.

Our burning sunset along the horizons

When we met for the first time.

 

Fantasies of love we desired,

Became our treasures of gold.

Our smiles of joy and laughter echoed

As the waves crashed at our feet.

 

Remember our eyes speaking for us

We promised to hold these moments

And lock them tightly within our hearts

Burying them beneath the sand.

 

Our hopes and dreams of forever

Glistened beneath the sunbeams

As we watched our love quickly fade

Without reasons, I will never understand.

 

 

Author's Note

Artwork by Tolkienmaster of DeviantArt.com

Reviews

[Monica]

I absolutely love your poem!! The first stanza went straight to my heart...to me, that's a very powerful way to begin and capture your reader. You tell a beautiful story of love and how it can fade...sad.

I also love the picture! The second I saw it, I knew the poem would be beautiful.
Well Done :)

[Heromen Selena]

I like "Our hopes and dreams of forever" and "As we watched our love quickly fade, Without reasons, I will never understand". I have never actually been in love per say but I feel like this would be the after math of it. Good job :)