Remember Me

First loves are mostly always the ones that are the most memorable.

And let the ocean waves speak

Whispering the words

I hold deep within my soul for you.

 

Do you remember the love we shared

So long ago when the world gazed.

Our burning sunset along the horizons

When we met for the first time.

 

Fantasies of love we desired,

Became our treasures of gold.

Our smiles of joy and laughter echoed

As the waves crashed at our feet.

 

Remember our eyes speaking for us

We promised to hold these moments

And lock them tightly within our hearts

Burying them beneath the sand.

 

Our hopes and dreams of forever

Glistened beneath the sunbeams

As we watched our love quickly fade

Without reasons, I will never understand.

 

 

Author's Note

Artwork by Tolkienmaster of DeviantArt.com

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

There is a stunning display here that refreshes my interest in the world of poetry.

[luna11]

Wow Beautiful poem, I love the imagery used. :D
xx

[Lily Mae]

An absolute beauty.. it gives me that funny feeling in the pit of my stomach that holds that question for eternity.. the why without reasons...to never understand.. sigh.. xo ;)

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent imagery and wording to this well written poem!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

just let me tell you this:
i'm adding this to my library among my favourite poems :)

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

Loved this feel...really great :-)

[Revery]

Intense and beautiful. The life of another and the life of a relationship lives on in the memories. Sometimes painful, sometimes bliss. Excellent write, as always from you Anna Rose.

[Wondering Mind]

I had a "first love blues" a couple of days ago, so i must agree with your description note... Yes...and lovely expression here..

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sometimes promises can not be kept .. and hearts forget .. This is most beautiful ..

Lovely .. Jasmine

[just is]

I LOVE THIS! This is so beuatiful, I too love the first stanza,
This is a wonderful write. Love the picture you used.