Remember Me

First loves are mostly always the ones that are the most memorable.

And let the ocean waves speak

Whispering the words

I hold deep within my soul for you.

 

Do you remember the love we shared

So long ago when the world gazed.

Our burning sunset along the horizons

When we met for the first time.

 

Fantasies of love we desired,

Became our treasures of gold.

Our smiles of joy and laughter echoed

As the waves crashed at our feet.

 

Remember our eyes speaking for us

We promised to hold these moments

And lock them tightly within our hearts

Burying them beneath the sand.

 

Our hopes and dreams of forever

Glistened beneath the sunbeams

As we watched our love quickly fade

Without reasons, I will never understand.

 

 

Author's Note

Artwork by Tolkienmaster of DeviantArt.com

Reviews

[Fate]

Do you remember the love we shared
So long ago when the world gazed.
Our burning sunset along the horizons
When we met for the first time.



i really love this lines...
it's beautiful! :)

[MusicLover]

i love this sorry it took me forever to get to it

[Drifter]

the wording was beautiful, it created such great imagery, too, The ending seems to hold so much truth to it...good write

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful and romantic....

[Dayran]

Marvellous reworking of a former experience when the world was new and man and beast were young. Nice write!

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

very touching...and sometimes a strange fact to come across.

[MOON]

Moving , the second stanza is particularly beautiful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and I like the poem. The story of love and the memory of missed lover's will haunt our dreams forever. I like the questions in your poem. Sometime we will never understand a hello or a goodbye. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MandaBear]

Intense and beautiful. I like it

[Lovely Soul]

Beautiful, and true :) I like it