Ocean Breeze

2nd attempt at a haiku

 

 

Cobalt blue heaven

Senses awaken imagination

Breathe into my soul.

Author's Note

I give up with the adding pictures thing. Driving me insane.

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Such a vivid picture....

[Lovely Soul]

beautiful poem. Lovely.

[KAREN]

Very relaxing! Beautifully written!

[外人 (Gaiji..]

great idea of writing it with blue letters (great association with the theme of the poem), just a few verses but enough to summon the feeling of ocean breeze on my skin :)
Very well done :) :)

[MandaBear]

You capture the ocean breeze very well.

[Dayran]

The volition with which we draw the all into the nature of our responses, with the heart of the transparent and open nature ..... is the same sensation we feel when we draw the will of man in the environment to influence our decision making. The difference is apparent. Nice write!

[zero binty]

Lmao about the pix. Caught me with the title because of my lineage. Kept me with the piece itself. Color plays well with the piece. Any piece about the ocean will almost automatically cause me to read. And yours is absolute.

[Holly Soques]

You capture the wisp of an ocean breeze very well. Well done on another stunning haiku!

[Heromen Selena]

I like this haiku the best :)