In The Shadows

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

My 1st Haiku ever written.

Glowing evil eyes linger

Every twist and turn they stare

Feeding on fear of human kind.

© 2012 ~Butterfly Kisses~

Author's Note

My first attempt at a Haiku. Be gentle, but I can take the criticism.

Robbie is a haiku inspiration. :)

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Dr Ayaz chandio

Good attempt...keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago

zero binty

Picture doesn't show on my read, but with your words I don't even need it. If you can continue to write a couple of sets of Haikus following this subject, I'd be deeply interested.

Posted 12 Years Ago

MandaBear

very good :) i tried to do a Haiku but i didn't turn out so well :( but my friend you did a wonderful job!! great job for a first time :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on April 13, 2012
Last Updated on April 13, 2012
Tags: politics, stalkers, darkness

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~Butterfly Kisses~

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN

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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..