Russian Roulette

 

 

One bullet to the head....

That's all it takes
As I watch the six-cylinder spin

Like a pinwheel blowing in the wind.

 

Lost in a trance as it spins,

A life that spiraled out of control.

Out of the light, and into the darkness

Reality - the freedom to let it all go.

 

I think for a moment asking the same questions

This wasted excuse for a life, did it even matter?

Playing a sick and twisted game of love

Where I always feel like the loser.

 

Tempted into salvation,

A everlasting sensation - thoughts of death

Lingering above me like a black cloud

Calling my name from the shadows.

 

One bullet to the head...

That's all it takes.

As I watch the six-cylinder spin,

Slowly it stops and I pull the trigger.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I kept hearing the term "like a game of russian roulette" all week in school, so I decided to write something about it. Might use this for class.

Wanted the ending to be kind of open-ended for those that read it. I hope I succeeded with that. As always, I am open to suggestions.

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Eerily creepy...loved the suspense....

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A perfectly written peice that leads the reader by the hand, well done, good read.

[Lost in Wonderland]

the end holds alot of suspense and is a vey good way to end this dark piece to make us readers really thisnk and worry/hope for the narrorator.

[Once Loved Now Lost]

amazing. Great job!

[Lovely Soul]

This is so powerful. I love it! ^-^

[Taylor]

That is so cool

[Luke Ritta]

i like this kind of poetry... nicely done!

[Lily Mae]

Pretty wicked but I like it.. Well done :) x

[Aella.lives]

"Playing a sick and twisted game of love/ Where I always feel like the loser." These lines, THESE LINES!

I love this poem, especially the spin on Russian Roulette... Really, evokes emotions. Great write.

[Becky Clancy]

._. Wow, scary
But good nonetheless