The Sound Of Music

My attempt to be creative, for a contest.

Drums beat to the sounds of my heart,

Followed by a voice that gives reason

Emotions swallowed hole, and I understand

As it eases the stress of the day away.

 

With every note, dance like no one is watching

Just swaying to beats and rhythm

Addiction of human nature,

In all the chaos of life, just give in.

 

Speed it up, slow it down

Add a little bit of rock and roll

Fill my head with the sounds of music

So I can let it all go.

Author's Note

I dont feel confident with this. Any suggestions are welcome.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The layed expressionism in this piece falls on the reader, well done, good read.

[Dayran]

Reminds me of the expression, ' If you can't beat it, you might as well join it.' Nice write!

[Aella.lives]

I like this piece, I don't know what suggestions I could give. I love how people can relate themselves with just 'dancing to the music' like living. Good write. :)

[reflectingus]

I can relate to this so so much. Music is anything and everything to me, and it is amazing how it can completely change your mood! I'd spend hours listening to music just to feel better, and it works, it de-stresses me, makes life seem easy, and everything just seems so beautiful all of a sudden. I love the pace and the beats you got going here, and this is almost lyrical. Especially the last stanza, I found it amazing. I can't find any flaw with this, but I would love to read similar pieces from you.

[Raven Starhawk]

I have no suggestions as this was outstanding. You have a mighty pen that knows where to enchant and entice even if the words are at times vague and mysterious but that only adds beauty.

[TawnyBlueStar]

you should feel confident :) It's great
I love "dance like no one is watching" :D
I like it

[J. J. Nightingale]

Letting go seems easy .. but it isn't always .. ..
I like your words .. they are Joyful ...

Jazzy :)

[MandaBear]

I think you should feel confident with this piece! I really liked it! :3

[Coyote Poetry]

Music is the motivation for the most of us. Can make us feel happy and allow our minds to awake in a positive way. I like the description in the poem.
"Speed it up, slow it down
Add a little bit of rock and roll"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Alexis]

I think you should feel confident with this piece! I really liked it! :3
I haven't written many poems about music before (since I actually find it somewhat challenging), but I do think that you did a really good job. :D