In The Silence

Through the emptiness, your voice echoes

Visions of the world in your eyes.

Words wrapping around my heart like a blanket,

I feel you in every moment of hurt.

 

Emotions bleeding through my veins,

I wish I could have saved you.

Your memory travels in the winds of time

Forever, echoing in the silence of my life.

 

Author's Note

Dedicated to a friend that committed suicide.

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Magnificent. The stanzas scribed so well are beautiful ones that touches base on something tragic. I have lost someone to suicide. Though I was just a child when my father committed suicide, but the grim reality of it never really hit me until my adult years.

[Larry Dyson]

empathic ...ceasing to be on this existance hurts....but opening another karmic window...Laury

[Dayran]

My sympathies for your loss. Its the unspoken hurt that is the most difficult. Nice write!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ana, Your dedication to your friend is heartfelt~My heart hurts for you...

Your emotions are vividly expressed through this piece, it overwhelms me with sadness.