In The Silence

Through the emptiness, your voice echoes

Visions of the world in your eyes.

Words wrapping around my heart like a blanket,

I feel you in every moment of hurt.

 

Emotions bleeding through my veins,

I wish I could have saved you.

Your memory travels in the winds of time

Forever, echoing in the silence of my life.

 

Author's Note

Dedicated to a friend that committed suicide.

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Could feel the emptiness of such a loss....

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and emotional poem. Some people become part of us and make us wiser for knowing them. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sometimes Blood]

Nicely written ...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simple, powerful and did bring a tear to my normally dry eyes, well done, great read.

[J. J. Nightingale]

MY HEART GOES OUT TO YOU .. I HAVE EXPERIENCED THIS KINDS OF LOSS , MANY TIMES .. I SEE THEIR FACES, AND I HEAR THEIR VOICES, EVEN NOW .. EACH LEFT A BIT OF THEMSELVES IN ME .. .. THIS IS A HEARTFELT DEDICATION ..

HUGS .. JAZZY

[Ruth]

Beautiful dedication love...never easy to flow the emotions through such a painful loss and time!
Wonderfully expressive, much love to you xoxo

[Aella.lives]

I sympathize greatly with this. Beautiful write and you've dedicated a marvelous piece to your friend. "Words wrapping around my heart like a blanket,
I feel you in every moment of hurt." These lines made my heart ache.

[Priscilla Sayers]

A beautiful dedication. It cuts deep to feel this sort of pain even as a reader. I am so sorry for your loss.

[MandaBear]

My sympathies for your loss. Great way to dedication to your friend.

[TawnyBlueStar]

That's beautiful.
In each line, there is pure emotion :)
Great dedication to your friend
I know how you feel. sorry for your loss.