Out Of This World

Another written for class bit.

Out of this world and into another,

Walking on thin layers of glass

To escape the vast chaos of reality

And be kissed with vast visionaries.

Something of impossibility,

But always possible if you can dream

Iridescent hues and monstrous globes

As far as the human mind can forsee.

Big bang theories, alien-like

Paintings of supernovas and galaxies

Spinning like pinwheels flying in the wind

Spitting and sprinkling glittered dust.

Masters of the vast universe

Lavish the sky with brilliance

Around an astronomical ball of flame

Tiny compared to where it stays.

My words could never capture

Nor could a painter the colorful lustre

Of death, reincarnation, and birth of anew

Something so out of this world.

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

A great thinker poem! Love the imagery and the flow, worded with brilliance!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Loved the flow and the imagery of this write...excellent job.....

[NZane]

This poem is "out of this world" *-* Blew my mind :) Awesome job! It sure makes one think..

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts in this poem. I like the many strong statements in the poem.
"Something of impossibility,
But always possible if you can dream"
No weakness in this poem. Just a poem to create thoughts. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Pratik]

This is a captivating piece! the deep realization o the mystery that surrounds the circle of birth-death-rebirth so well captured by this wonderful poem..The lustrous words you use bring an extra magic to all of it! very well done Anna :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love your Universal style of writing! This is magnificient!...what a beauty you penned here!!!

[Jordan's Back]

Deep.... and wonderful

[Lily Mae]

You have kissed the cosmos with this gem.. beautifully done..x

[Sometimes Blood]

A very thought provoking poem

[Tarrna]

So very pure and beautiful. An amazing write