My Love, My Valentine

Something for Valentine's Day....with a little tribute to those broken and lonely hearts

Yellow and orange glows, fluttering

In the soft breezes of whispers

The sweet nothings we feel in heart

For each other on this one special day.

 

A remembrance of love, written in the stars

As the love birds sing their own tune

Swaying the notes of their beating hearts

Beneath the spotlight of the glowing moon.

 

We must remember not to forget

Those broken and lonely hearts

And wipe the tears for their crying eyes

For someone they hold close, but remain so far.

 

Spreading rose petals across the floor

Of this chaotic world, the need to be loved.

Til the last candle stops burning, and the last rose dies

In my heart, you will remain - My love, my valentine.

Author's Note

For the record, I am one of those broken, lonely hearts no pun intended. lol. So I know the hatred of this day, for sure!

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

(((You're never alone with all of us around)))

lets take all our broken pieces and make one big beautiful heart.. full of tape and glue and staples.. those are, the best kind..

because they know, and can appreciate love, as special, and fleeting..

Happy Valentines to you sweet friend..

xo :)

[Lily Mae]

Ditto.. ;) I'll remember you as you have remembered me... that way we're not alone..x

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. Valentine day can be a good day or bad. Need to find time to be loving and kind. Or sometime alone can keep you safe? I like the desire and description in your poem.
"We must remember not to forget
Those broken and lonely hearts
And wipe the tears for their crying eyes
For someone they hold close, but remain so far."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Amila Jay]

This is quite meaningful, a beautiful piece of writing:-)

[J. J. Nightingale]

VERY POIGNANT INDEED ..

BEAUTIFUL .. JAZZ

[Ruth]

You say so much within this beautiful piece!
Always such emotion within your words....Valentine's Day seems to be as much of a farce as anything else! lol
To be loved is to be loved everyday, not just one, maybe I am getting miserable lol
xoxo

[Draven]

This is beautiful and meaningful. I like this one a lot.

[Pratik]

Beautiful and heartbreaking....Valentine's Day is around the corner... and its a day to celebrate love, both present and past.. your poem preaches that eternity of love :)

[Asb]

very beautifully done. . . .!
all the feelings seem so real after reading this :)
a grt read for sure

[Life Is like Trust...It..]

Wow,so short but so inspiring. I love this;it can relate to many things. "We must remember not to forget those broken hearts." That is so beautiful. I will suscribe.