Apocalypse

Playing on the idea and the need for change in our world.

Diamond tears glisten in ths sunlight

As the sun begins to fall into emotions of regret

And sorrow for the evil to become

Upon this final day as betrayer of all life.

 

Breath of flames and ash overtaken

Consuming the air in a blackened haze

Brushed with the rapid gusts of reality

On the doorsteps, humanity underestimated.

 

Criminal punishment for the forskaen

The mind and wills to do right, forgotten

Burning in the desire to find the answer.

A needle in a haystack, lost and frozen in time.

 

Echoes of the silence and broken

Scream loudly through loneliness and regret

In it's deathly wake of "it's too late now"

All cannot be forgiven now.

 

 

Author's Note

Personally, I believe the apocalypse at least the "Dec 21, 2012" is not real. And even if it is, we should be living our lives as if we'd be dead tomorrow.

Reviews

[AK]

Awesome!

[Jordan's Back]

Wonderful and dark

[Asb]

great view and above all u wrote it in a nice manner.....!
a nice read :)

[Sometimes Blood]

Utterly magnificent!

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

Very well said, and I agree with your note, no one can predict the end anyway, form the beginning you should always live as if 2morrow does not exist :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Consuming the air in a blackened haze, Echoes of the silence and broken, Upon this final day as betrayer of all life. Excellent lines! I agree with your note. Well done!

[Priscilla Sayers]

As always a wise view. We should always live as if there will be no more tomorrows. Yet always make plans to make tomorrow brighter and learn from yesterday's mistakes. Well written, fear and acceptance protrayed nicely.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's scary to think of the end. We should live life as if it were our last...to appreciate the "here and now", and do the right thing. It's easier said than done. Thanks for this thought provoking piece. Well penned!

[JRB]

Echoes of the silence and broken ,Scream loudly through loneliness and regret

like the thought line above nice write

[CrushedPepperMinTCHrist..]

I Love this awesome poem :D