Neverland

A faraway land,

Hollow forests of enchantment

Chance the opportunity of a lifetime

To leave the darkness far behind you.

 

Everyday a feeling of spring,

Be born a new with accomplishment

To bask in the mist of joys,

And get lost in the forever young.

 

Imaginations soar eternal universes

Glistening in the sunlight of echoeing falls

Of blue velvet glass,

Washing away all broken memories of time.

 

 

Author's Note

I've been working on this for 3 days and every time I've attempted to make it longer it didnt work.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Blue velvet glass....Nice write:-)

[Draven]

Well, its not my type of poem... However I must admit it is good.

[Priscilla Sayers]

An enchanting read! Well done!

[NZane]

I love the desciptions :) Good work ^^

[TawnyBlueStar]

beautiful the way it is :)
short and sweet is what makes it perfect
love it :D

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Not ment to be long! This was stunning in imagery just the way it is!

[KAREN]

It's prefect just the way it is. It filled me with a sense of peace, and I felt in awe of the wonderful imagery.

[LilMissWriter17]

Your poems always create beautiful imagery :) Another great poem!

[Ruth]

I really like the concise quality to it love...very beautiful, you take the reader to a realm where they can let go for a while, mission accomplished! :) xoxo

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i love the last stanza!

it has amazing imagery!