Torment, I Will Always Love You

Inspiration, where the hell have you been!!

Destined and dark obsession

Paralyzing thoughts and emotions

To the sinful and lustful deeds

Scripting the words she whispers.

 

Fires breach the skin,

As I am consumed by her love

Blackened and charred,

But only she can control the flames.

 

I desire her darkness,

The beautiful rays of gothic macabre

Abducting everything I've known

To be brought into her own world.

 

Endless tranquility and solace

Chills running up and down the spine

With abated breath I am awakened

Enslaved to her beautiful torment.

 

Drenched in her slimy yolk

Covered in the dark bliss

And erotic temptations to bestow

She knows just how to please me.

 

In the seas of imaginations,

I wander the skies and soar higher

Above this twisted insanity

Of which I worship on a daily basis.

 

Simply, it is an obsession

Verses that can never be described

Under the spell of poetic words

In the gardens of a bittersweet love.

 

Torment, I will always love you

With you there is no one else

Forever holding you close to my heart

My darkest addiction.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i never wanted this poem to end it was just that great... you know you really put a lot of emotion into your writing and it really speaks for itself

[Shattered Dreams]

Wonderful use of words! I can feel every word and know that's what you planned to do from the start. Oh! what an addiction it is!

[Wolfwind]

This is reminiscent of a closet addiction of something we should be holding onto. lol. I really loved the flow and alluring power your words held. While I don't believe that torment should be what is held close, I can understand it's addictive power.

Great Ink!
Aaron

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Torment, I will always love you
With you there is no one else
Forever holding you close to my heart
My darkest addiction............oh yes we do this, so excellent Butterfly! .........this puts me in mind of something old of mine where I was in the same state of mind.........
Part of one called Disguise..........hope you don't mind me sharing......

That which I love and holds my heart
Brings pain and joy the same
As I so love the joy it brings
I can overlook the pain

That which I love will never see this pain
When I look into his eyes
Just a smile to show my joy
And this pain disguise
100/100

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and powerful poetry. Each line written with skill. I like how you described each emotion and desire in the poem. No weakness is this outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh What an addiction it is!.. I sooo feel this, Anna Rose! This dark obsession is simply delicious... I just can take my eyes away from this lovely write. Magnificent!

[paradise]

Freaking amazing yet again. Loved it really caught my attention and made me want to keep reading.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Love the imagery...good poem...

[Larry Dyson]

seems to be dissonant..is that what you wished here?..if so thats great ..but you should reinforce it a bit dont you think..make it bolder?..Endless tranquility and solace--Chills running up and down the spine--when im tranquil I dont have chills running anywhere.. so the statement makes me think of dissonance...?

[Kim]

Really liked the last stanza, This is quite the powerful read.
I liked this write alot, awesome write!