Uncertainty

Bleh...I'm not sure where I plan to go with this so I'm letting my heart do the writing for me.

Sounds of guns blaring

Battling wars never silent.

Emotions shake, rattle and roar

Like an earthquake, inside my mind.

 

My heart aches for the truth

As I plead for the answers

To the burning questions

I keep holding within.

 

Where do I go from here?

Which path will lead me

To the right place of existence

Into the deep feelings of "I belong"?

 

I have made my sacrifices

My heart held up for the Gods

As I dangle upon this life's thread

Picking up what is left of me.

 

 

Reviews

[emma]

Perfect poem for this day . Great emotions.

[J. J. Nightingale]

My heart held up for the Gods

As I dangle upon this life's thread

Picking up what is left of me.


GOOD LINES .. THIS HAS HEART .. JASMINE

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this is a poem that fits the day...it makes me think of how a soldier might see or feel things after a war...it was a beautiful way to remember and represent the soldiers that fought for our freedom...

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loved the 2nd stanza, truthful words in there. so well written.

[Wolfwind]

This seems to speak of what a soldier might feel, coming home after years of war. The memories still thundering inside their head, while they ponder how to return back into the world they had left behind so long ago.
On the hand, the same could be said about a bade relationship too. lol

Great Ink!
Aaron