Uncertainty

Bleh...I'm not sure where I plan to go with this so I'm letting my heart do the writing for me.

Sounds of guns blaring

Battling wars never silent.

Emotions shake, rattle and roar

Like an earthquake, inside my mind.

 

My heart aches for the truth

As I plead for the answers

To the burning questions

I keep holding within.

 

Where do I go from here?

Which path will lead me

To the right place of existence

Into the deep feelings of "I belong"?

 

I have made my sacrifices

My heart held up for the Gods

As I dangle upon this life's thread

Picking up what is left of me.

 

 

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Truly something to treasure as it channels something raw and powerful. I think the soul of this is breathtakingly smart.

[Dezzyray]

it's just..... incredible! :D it's true for some people out there :3

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You had a Blackbelt Judo throw plot twist going on here. I love the way it went internal. Provocative emotion that moves the reader.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"My heart aches for the truth, As I plead for the answers, To the burning questions, I keep holding within."~ This is so honestly conveyed... Well penned, Anna Rose!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I've felt like this so many times before...

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Sounds like your heart is in the right place....

[kathrina]

I love the details. :)

[TawnyBlueStar]

εi3
i like the second stanza :)
lots of emotions :D
love it

[Priscilla Sayers]

The pain is intense in such a short and concise way you have managed to give me that feeling of anxiety, hopelessness, and the sense of being..."Not Sure":)
I feel you.
You are a jem.

[Lily]

Great emotions put into this! Great description, and this is just wonderful!!! :)