Lost In A Kiss

When you kiss me...

There are sparks

In the flames of my desire

Igniting, fireworks on the fourth of July.

 

Strobe light flashes

Blinded by the romance of it all

Head over heels in eternity

Filling my heart with passion.

 

Intoxicated sweet poison

Lingering sensuality on my lips

Falling ever so slowly, gracefully

Within all of your climaxes.

 

Caught in the embrace

Irresistable force of love

Felt only in the erotic

Dirty dancing of the tongue.

 

I have never felt more alive

In the agony and ectasy

As I lose all control over me

The heavy pounding drums of my heart.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Awwww !
How I always wanted to be kissed.
2nd from the last line--- that I have
dreamed of, "as I lose all control over
me". What a geat line---- and dangerous one.
Great writeing, great poem.
Thank you ,
---- Eagle Cruagh

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

amazing write...this is a piece that some can kinda relate to meaning more that they finally know they love someone by that kiss...!!!

[Priscilla Sayers]

Fanning the flame and doing it well! Nice write!

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Whew .. and Wow .. I feel like I am hearing a secret conversation .. mmmm .

Nice .. Jasmine

[Rhea]

lost in the words..... nice poem...

[Wolfwind]

In memories past I could say that I've know this. You certainly capture the essence of connection that two people can have at a single moment, with just one kiss.

Very well written!
Aaron

[HeIsWe]

I really like it, it really tells that kissing this person is amazing to you.

[Revery]

I thinks the goal is to try to captivate the inexplicable. Especiallly when it comes to an experience like this. Your poem decribes it from many angles that capture the intensity, the power and utter bliss of it all. If only the boy knew he had this effect but maybe that would be too much strength over the one he is kissing. Excellent. I like the mix of sweet to erotic, which is like reality, from "gracefully" to "climax" and from "force of love" to "Dirty dancing of the tongue". love it.