Lost In A Kiss

When you kiss me...

There are sparks

In the flames of my desire

Igniting, fireworks on the fourth of July.

 

Strobe light flashes

Blinded by the romance of it all

Head over heels in eternity

Filling my heart with passion.

 

Intoxicated sweet poison

Lingering sensuality on my lips

Falling ever so slowly, gracefully

Within all of your climaxes.

 

Caught in the embrace

Irresistable force of love

Felt only in the erotic

Dirty dancing of the tongue.

 

I have never felt more alive

In the agony and ectasy

As I lose all control over me

The heavy pounding drums of my heart.

Reviews

[BLBrown]

lovely and evocative...anyone who's ever experienced a passionate kiss that takes them beyond reason will identify with your poem...very nice.

[tk]

very sensual and intimate piece! this beyond doubt describes the feeling in a kiss.. being lost.. as if time stops, and all of our senses stop working. the only thing left is fire and sparks... :) brilliant piece! loved this stanza most:
"Intoxicated sweet poison
Lingering sensuality on my lips
Falling ever so slowly, gracefully
Within all of your climaxes." ^_^
♥♥♥

[Amila Jay]

sweet love...nice poem:)

[Chantelle]

This is very passionate and very emotive. It certainly triggers the imagination. Very tasteful. Have you ever considered writiing short stories?
:)

[WildSoul]

ohhhh i so love this! So beautifully written. I can almost visualize the whole scenario by reading your poem. Beautiful!! Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

When the love is strong. The sweet kiss can light a fire with a soft kiss. I like the gentle and hopeful emotion in your words. When two people are in love. A kiss should make the heart dance and be content. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poetic Beauty]

you have described the sensual side of a kiss. The changes it causes in our whole body making it come alive and feel euphoric.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Nice

[KAREN]

Love the third and fourth stanza. Very well written romantic poem.

[Jennifer]

So romantic :)