Immortal

Special thanks to Priscilla Moore, for her inspiration of this. And everyone else who inspires me, you played a part in this too.

Ink filled pens

Wearing our hearts

In the vulnerable stings

Of broken love and pasts.

Stories to be told

Imaginations soar

Painting the creative aspects

In a search of self-reflection.

 

Pick a color,

Let your rage show

In the constant spills

Like bittersweet lullabies.

 

We are not God,

As we search within our selves

For the answering of burning

Undying questions of reality.

 

We are not infinite...

As humans...

Caught in the idea

To live forever and beyond.

 

We are our words from the wise

Creators of what we choose to be born

In the skies of eternity to which

We will remain immortal.

Author's Note

Not sure about the title though, suggestions will be appreciated.

Reviews

[SkylerJames]

I love the flow and message of this piece, very nice writing. it give a very emotional image. beautifully done

[Raven Starhawk]

Though these are words they sing to me like lyrics. I can vision them with such detail and in my head I am watching something marvelous unfold.

[Ruth]

I like the title love! :)
The poem is beautifully conveyed too, a wonderful woven piece that reflects so much poignancy!
xoxo

[Wolfwind Words]

The dreamer dreams of visions beyond
The writer weaves a tapestry too see
The poet's lines are curves of the heart
You capture it all right from the start

I really like the way your ink captures the deeper thoughts that make us dive into the etherium of our inner selves.

Wonderful Ink!
Wolfie

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This is really amazing, I enjoyed this write.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The secret of life is between the lines somewhere in this spiritual work. You left a piece of yourself in that space as well. Its funny how to become immortal, an artist has to live in some at some level as incomplete..as they constantly break off pieces of their souls to leave behind.

Exactly: " We are not infinite... As humans... Caught in the idea To live forever and beyond." Nice work, great thoughts. Wonderful write.

[paradise]

The title is great for it don't change it!!!! and omg you shock me everysingle time I read your poems they all seem to get even more beautiful from the last one favourites!!!!