The Invisible Plan

Been seeing these on Writerscafe, so I decided to write one myself. A rambling thought in my head.

Have you ever looked down

Deep within yourself

Wondered and asked the question

How did I end up here?

Or how did I get this way?

 

All of us, on the same but different paths

Within our lives like going through a portal

Or some kind of tunnel directing us.

Between what we see, or have seen

And what we have on the inside.

 

We share the same battles within ourselves

Fighting our demons and dark thoughts

Like Dr. Jeykll and Mr. Hyde

The good versus the evil...

Side of ourselves.

 

I wonder if this is part of something

Something more than just God himself

A universal, invisible force of a plan

And we each have a role...

In this game called life.

 

Overruling and observing...

Is this our salvation?

Or our own destruction

With the deepest depths of humanity

As we cross paths and follow

To the end.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh yes I believe we all go through these questions many times in our lives... I think even we don't understand ourselves sometime, like why we do certain routines or like or dislike certain things. Coarse if we spend to much time looking for answers we will miss out on living in the present.

A thought provoking ramble.

[Lily Mae]

Good verses evil and it's always a fine balance between the two. This is a great write... x

[Dove]

I have definitely asked myself the very same questions before. Sometimes I dont even understand myself. I really do like this poem

[HeIsWe]

i like it

[Larry Dyson]

I know myself I have layers built upon layers of meaning and thoughts and decisions and choices...where I go left..you may go right...ad infinitem it compounds into differences...not to ponder too long lest I forget to make the next decision...

[Shep]

Been there and done that and back again, awesome poem and asks a great question that we can all relate. Nicely done.

[Aly Jones]

Wow. This entire piece makes you wonder about everything you have ever known. Intriguing and mystifying.

[KAREN]

Very thought provoking!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Touching work. You have found an excellent way to relate to us all.

[Crow]

An interesting and inspiring way to think of self observation..."In this game called life."

Well penned!

[J. J. Nightingale]

The answer lies in balance .. An ability to level the playing field .. We do have free choice .. Life is a battle with self .. ..

Your words are thought provoking .. Jasmine :)