Snake Goddess

Dressed in emerald green

Her body sways and slithers

Like a snake lost in a trance

Moving to drumbeat of your heart.

 

Coiling and twisting her arms

Leaving you paralyzed, hypnotized

As she dances so gracefully

Bewildered within her mystery.

 

Lost in the bittersweet image

Hitting you like venom filled bite

Choking you up on the inside

At a loss for words by her beauty.

 

Another victim,

Caught in her merciless desire

Her revenge, venom

Running through your veins.

Reviews

[Brandi Nicole]

great imagery! very nice!

[Crow]

A wonderful piece. It has an excellent flow, amd superb imagery. Any man could easilly fall prey to her sectuctive nature. I love it.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Passionate. it bites! Love it.
You go girl!!!!
You have brightened up my day again!!! it keeps getting dark, and then i read your poem and find myself proud of you, proud to have the pleasure of reading such beautiful poetry.

[Hazle Eyed Girl]

very good. the flow was pretty good and i love how i got a picture of her. very well done :)

[Amila Jay]

Wow I'd say, excellent write:)

Wonderfully done. This is so powerful, I felt at home by reading.
Into my favorites! xx

[paradise]

aha it made me lsugh i love

[KAREN]

Nicely done! Great descriptions bring the poem alive for the reader!

[Coyote Poetry]

I was lucky. I was station in the tropics for many years. I saw the large snakes. I left them alone. I like the poem. The description create a vision of power and control. I like the story and the ending to this outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

This was very good and it has all the well placed treats that make me hunger for more. I especially like how you weave the details around what is happening and everything just falls so perfectly into place.