Comets + Violins

Another dream of mine I tried to capture.

Swirls of emerald,

Purple haze clouds

Amidst, in a drift flowing

With the diamonds, beyond horizons.

 

A vast darkness

Of black and beauty collide

Within the corners of my mind

As comets wash away the pain.

 

A soft monotone,

Of violins filling my ears

Comforting me in this empty room

Drifting in the freedoms

Of imaginations and wonder.

Reviews

[Brandi Nicole]

i love this....."a vast darkness of black and beauty collide".

[Priscilla Sayers]

A magical write!

[Amila Jay]

Sizzling:)

[paradise]

peaceful and prettty

[KAREN]

Feels peaceful and calm. Great imagery!

[Crow]

Reminds me of the night skies I have been watching for these last two weeks accentuated by the sounds of Mozart, only to be climaxed tonight by a cosmic light show 'Orionids Meteor shower' tonight.

Wonderful imagery!

[Dayran]

The music of the universe come alive with the swirls and pulses of the constellations, moving in a passion to bring comfort to a heart that wonders. A large canvas of the infinite, where we are as observers, seeking to find ourselves. Nice write!

[Coyote Poetry]

This would be a good evening. Violin music and the stars to see. I like the description and the place you took me with your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

This poem went above and beyond what I could ever hope for in a enchanting read. This was a real treat to read this morning and I hope you continue to compose these mystical wonders.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Beautiful work here. It was like the story of a new spirit being born. My mind was flooded with imagery that was our of this world...for lack of a better word.