Fly

Inspired by all my wonderful friends on this Cafe and have so far met. I'm sure they are plenty more to meet. Never stop inspiring me. :)

Why must we be torn

In order to learn how to fly?

Drowning within our broken hearts

And dark memories past

Forever lurking within our minds.

Holding on to beautiful dreams

Floating within my oceans

As I get washed away from my shores

I will hold on tight and never let go.

Holding within my heart

The feelings of kindness and serenity

I will prosper for the rest of my life.

Even without wings, I will fly.

Reviews

[Sakib]

An inspirational poem. "Even without wings, I will fly" I loved this line. You are a great writer. Keep writing. :)

[Raven Starhawk]

This is majestic. It feels like a kiss from the past and with it memories fall into place. You have a great poem here.

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Simply wonderful, I really enjoyed this write.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sweet Anna Rose .. You are loved ... ... Jasmine :)

[John Stussy]

Beautiful tribute to writers and their sensations. Kudos to you as well Anna Rose, never let the words stop flowing.

[Pratik]

Brilliant one..:) "Why must we be torn/In order to learn how to fly?"...truly it baffles me, sometimes to follow our dreams why should we forget our roots? That's not done really.."As I get washed away from my shores/I will hold on tight and never let go.".. that should be the spirit! Never forget where you belong! this might be a tribute to the fellow writers but I choose to interpret it in this way..This is an amazing piece of work! My next poem somewhat on the same theme.. Keep going.. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You are a true inspiration. :)