Written In The Stars

I have been reminsicing in the nights,

Memories of you and I

Where we danced along the lake

'Neath a moonlit diamond sky.

 

You sprinkled me in roses

And kisses with 'I love you's"

Burying candles in the sand

As they glowed for you and I.

 

We waltzed to our own love song

Even the leaves on the trees swayed

To the music in the soft gentle

Breezes of that beautiful night.

 

Romance was in the air,

And our love was written within

The stars as they shined brightly for us

You convinced me, this love is eternal.

Author's Note

To awnser the questions behind the reason for this being in past tense: The relationship ended sadly.

Reviews

[sounds of shadows]

a sweet reminiscence. With everything but the final verb in the past tense, it could be the story of the start of a current relationship, or the hopeful beginning of a relationship that has since ended. I think the slight ambiguity broadens the appeal.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This would make a beautiful song. The sights and sounds take me away to another world.

[Shattered Dreams]

Your poems never fail to touch me. This is really romantic, and, again, I felt every word you wrote.

[emma]

very sweet and romantic. quite a lovely poem.

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This is so wonderful and lovely, I enjoyed this write alot.