Written In The Stars

I have been reminsicing in the nights,

Memories of you and I

Where we danced along the lake

'Neath a moonlit diamond sky.

 

You sprinkled me in roses

And kisses with 'I love you's"

Burying candles in the sand

As they glowed for you and I.

 

We waltzed to our own love song

Even the leaves on the trees swayed

To the music in the soft gentle

Breezes of that beautiful night.

 

Romance was in the air,

And our love was written within

The stars as they shined brightly for us

You convinced me, this love is eternal.

Author's Note

To awnser the questions behind the reason for this being in past tense: The relationship ended sadly.

Reviews

[sounds of shadows]

a sweet reminiscence. With everything but the final verb in the past tense, it could be the story of the start of a current relationship, or the hopeful beginning of a relationship that has since ended. I think the slight ambiguity broadens the appeal.

[Larry Dyson]

hmm ..all in past tense....BUT?

[Dayran]

A swaying musical melody of love between two people as it takes cognizance of their relationship with each other. Great write!

[paradise]

awwhe moment I love how its such a romantic cute one I love this so amazing tht actually made me start to think of true love

[Raven Starhawk]

There was a vast amount of details that made my imagination soar to new heights.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

love...so much emotion and power... you wrote this piece perfectly...

[J. J. Nightingale]

You do have a way with words ... lovely .. Jasmine

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Star brightly shining!!! Girl, you are blazing today!!!

[Priscilla Sayers]

I hear and feel you, a beautiful scene indeed! I also feel sorrow. Well expressed!

[LilMissWriter17]

This is beautiful! Wow :)