Frozen

Unable to feel my senses

Lost in the darkest of my memories

My past frozen in time,

Locked tightly within my mind.

 

All the colors of beauty

Are now just black and grey.

I try to repaint their colors,

As they melt and drip to the ground.

 

Forever bound and broken,

Trying to escape the bitter cold.

Icy tears glittering in the moonlight

Remembering what you've done to me.

 

The saddest violin,

Keeps replaying the same old song.

A burden that has become my own,

My past still frozen in time.

 

Reviews

[J Kiplinger Young]

i love all of your writing. thank you for sharing.
try not to state emotion directly, instead let your reader experience the emotion through images and actions