California Dreaming

Almost forgotten memories of love.

I remember the days we spent

On some other distant world

Purple and pink clouds

Floating beyond boats

Just over the horizons.

 

Our feet welded in the pearlish sand

As our hearts beat to every wave

Crashing amongst the shore

Those days, when we were in love.

 

I've spent my last few days

Lost in our memories we've made

Trapped inside a bottle

Now floating to some place unknown

With our bittersweet "I love you's"

Echoing inside my mind.

 

The palm trees even bowed

Like in a strong wind

As I got lost in the agony and extasy

Of your soft hands moving all over me.

 

My thoughts of you are screaming

Like the gulls flying in the breeze

As I dream of our days spent

On sandy California shores.

 

You will forever hold the key
To my heart, now yearning for you

Your memory, locked in a treasure box

I will forever hold these memories

Of you.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Taylor]

A marverlous tribute to someone who impacts your life with joy and love. All of the usual elements are here in this piece, so it doesn't disappoint. I loved this one.

[Amila Jay]

I surrender to the sweetness, lovely write:)

[turning violet]

bittersweet
nice

[John Stussy]

Beautiful poetic recollections you illustrated for your readers, thank you for sharing it with us all.

[Sakib]

A nice passionate poem. I liked the desire, wish in this poem. An adorable poem. I liked it.

[Shreds Of Me]

I could really the depth within this write, such a sadness but yet beauty, and thanx for your precious review, ♥

[J Kiplinger Young]

you have managed to make sorrow beautiful

[Brandi Nicole]

such beautiful sorrow.....sweet sadness. this is the way of love. I enjoyed this piece. thank you for sharing!

[Raven Starhawk]

I can open my eyes to a dream such as this. You penned the dream marvelously.

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sweet words of remembered love .. This California girl can relate .... Jasmine