Hell On A Leash

If you've seen the ad for a book entitled "Hell On A Leash" --it inspired me. haha

Torn by so many

And you are not the only one

Who has shattered my heart

And scattered the pieces of me.

 

Strong willed, I will survive

Seeking revenge upon all

My wings may have been torn

But I refuse to just wither and die.

 

Feel the sharpness of my blade

As it goes right through your heart

A final kiss on your sweet lips

Bidding you an eternal goodnight.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[TheFemininePad]

Powerfully written, and very well worded. Hell has no fury like a scorned woman. I think you did a great job with this poem. It's short, and right to the point. I can even feel your anger within the imagery. It's not a particularly pleasant image, but it teaches a good point. Excellent writing.

[Eagle Cruagh]

This sou;nds very serious.
I will be very careful to maintain
your respect.
Great poem, short and sweet and
to the point.
Good writing and great strength.
----- Eagle Cruagh