My Dark Prince

Intimidating,

And feared by all

That worship the light

Of eternal days.

 

Prince of darkness,

I am bound to your dark lust.

Casted in the shadows

'Neath the glimmering moonlight.

 

I was lost, but you have found me

I will find my way home with you

Buried in your bittersweet sins

Embraced in your agony and extasy.

 

You call for my love,

Lingering in the fierce breeze.

Hypnotized in your loving voice,

Tempting the torment within me.

 

A dark aura of pale skin,

Lost in your bluish eyes

I do not want to escape this darkness

Forever I am by your side.

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Taylor]

The allure and enticing way a "bad boy" can draw some people is amazing to me. You do a wonderful job of showing that in the underling message here. I like the line:"Embraced in you agony and Ecstasy(you spelled that word wrong above). Great poem. Very ethereal and slightly dark connotations.

[Coyote Poetry]

A journey into darkness and lust in this poem. I like the description and emotion of the words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[J. J. Nightingale]

Dark and delicious thoughts .. Jasmine

[Dayran]

An adventure into a world of the passions, which hopefully, will not leave out the rationality of the experience. Dark also represents the experience of the earth, where the denizenry of the stars have fallen to and are discovering what it means to be human. A poem that seeks to plant its feet on the ground.

[Inyourshadow]

Romancing the darkside of ones nature, we all lean towards the shadows from time to time to taste a little of the sweeter pleasures pain can offer, for what is evil some say drugs others rock music so why not indulge oneself every now and again lol love the penning to the forbidden side of love, keep em' coming

[Augustus]

Another one in the same dark romance genre that you seem to be so good at. I found certain lines to be especially appealing: most notably "Buried in your bittersweet sins" and "A dark aura of pale skin"...You paint a picture of twilight, where light meets darkness in a surreal experience. Well done!
I truly would like to see you try a different genre...I'm sure you'll be good at whatever you try...

[∂αʌ<..]

magnificent writing! the flow and smoothness is just wow!

[Raindrop]

I definitely love your style of writing! Another amazing poem. Dark is tempting and this poem shows it completely. This one really got to me. Nicely done!

[paradise]

Awesome It flowed great made sence i loved how its a kind of descriptive story plus its a dark love alwasy a favourite :D

[Amila Jay]

Amazing write:)