Sweet Tooth

Halloween is approaching....and I have a sweet tooth.

Sweet cherry lips

And peppermint tongue

Dancing in the darkness

To the music of desire.

 

Bathe me in candy kisses

Leave me wanting more.

Drifting in our chocolate dreams

Upon cotton candy clouds.

 

A taste for your sweetness

Bound to your love and lust

I have a sweet tooth,

Yearning just for you.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Taylor]

I am quite fond of the candy word play. If this poem would have had a more whimsical slant. I wonder if it might have been neat to name some of your favorite candies in the poem itself.A good write. You could feel the want and desire in this piece. Great Job on this one.

[Amila Jay]

Lovely write:)

[Dayran]

A cherry pie wish in candyland to give off itself to someone worthy. A poem that seeks an appreciation of its worth.

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice movement of words and desire for the sweet things are strong in your words. I like the complete poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

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pander my sweet tooth...and im yours!
hihi
veryyyyyyyyyyy sweeeet!:P

[Hayley]

Very clever! So sweet and perfectly worded!

[ShameemAkhtar]

What more can I say... :)

Very flavorful and certainly not for the diabetics ;)

Loved it

[LilMissWriter17]

This is yummy :P ahahaha

[Antonio Valentino]

well as long as you brush your teeth after, otherwise you might have to have a cavity filled..

sweet as syrup and twice as yummy
:)

[paradise]

Oh yeahh I love it LOVE and Emotion make me smile and with candy what ca=n e better well written also I like the layout amzing write :D