My Immortal Love

Vampire Romance

Cast me under your spell,

My heart I will surrender.

Whispering sweet nothings

Between these sheets, we lay.

 

Let us make the angels jealous

With rage of our eternal love.
As your cold dark lips press against me

My heart racing out of control.

 

Deadly lustful desires,

I cannot escape your embrace.

It would be a lie, if I told you

I never longed for such dark romance.

 

I see the moonlight in your eyes,

As we make our love anew.

Glistening fangs entering my skin

Take me now, I'm forever yours.

 

My dearest immortal love,

My rose with heavenly thorns.

Your mystery and beauty leaves me mesmerized

Hypnotized, craving more of you.

Reviews

[Augustus]

This poem is a stroke of genius. Again, I am quite amazed at how you manage to maintain such grace in your lines even when you speak of something as raw as the romance of vampires. Oh the poem has darkness alright, and it has just the right shade of darkness. It neither loses out on the romance by getting too dark, nor does it lose the darkness (which is essential, since vampires are involved), by letting the romance spiral out of control. A beautifully controlled and deftly passionate write. Again, several gems here..."Let us make the angels jealous", "I cannot escape your embrace","My rose with heavenly thorns" amongst others....I am impressed! Delightful poem!

[Aly Jones]

So cool. This is a completely unique poem to me.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i love this poem... it has a dark side and so much emotion... only if love was to last forever !!!

[J Kiplinger Young]

Beautiful piece, very well written.

[J. J. Nightingale]

A Halloween Poem .. Dark and delicious .. With a little naughty on the side ...

Fun .. Jasmine .. :)

[Larry Dyson]

Just posed a question in My mind... what is next in our immortal sin list ..more than loving our Vampiri?.. hmm guess we will all have to think and meditate on that ..Nez PAis?.. ps //ty for the reviews..

[HeIsWe]

Really interesting, vampires always make the best romance stories/poems.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Like your poem, I am hypnotized. This is truly delicious. A romantic at heart, I love Romance in any form, especially the immortal love.

[Sakib]

Really interesting one. Vampire Romance!! I liked the poem. Great write.

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WOW, this is really good, love the feelings imprinted. So nicely done!