Fireburst

Been some time since I wrote anything remotely erotic. Wrote this by candlelight. A Senryu.

 

Fires of passion

Burst upon heavenly stars

Set my heart aflame.

Author's Note

The_heart_of_passion_by_DuvallGear

Reviews

[Ruth]

Beautiful! Shows the depth of passion...the universal quality, all consuming xoxo

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong use of words. Create a powerful poem. Artwork gave life to your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Short and sweet... nicely done.

[Dr. Wood ?]

says it all in so few words

[J. J. Nightingale]

SOUNDS RIGHT .. I'VE KNOW IT WELL ...


HOT . JAZZY

[Taylor]

Leaves me wanting more, but I suppose that's the expected result of good Senryu.
I wouldn't change a thing.
Reading it make me want to light a few candles myself :)

[Raven Starhawk]

Short but a piece that surely will have readers loving it, perhaps feeling it. I love how you put it in huge red letters too. It gave it more power in my opinion, but most of I like the poem itself.