Fireburst

Been some time since I wrote anything remotely erotic. Wrote this by candlelight. A Senryu.

 

Fires of passion

Burst upon heavenly stars

Set my heart aflame.

Author's Note

The_heart_of_passion_by_DuvallGear

Reviews

[Krithika Raghavan]

Fires of poetry
Burst upon words just as stars
Set your poem aflame.

[Renée]

Oo0o0ooo nicely captured !

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Beautiful imagery and picture!
I see this poem being relatable to passion for almost anything.

[Katelyn]

Wow! This is so beautiful. 100/100. Keep up the great work! (:

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful...so full of passion....

[MandaBear]

Wonderful as usual

[Lily Mae]

Anything with stars always takes me far away and in a perfect place :) I love it..xoxo

[Heromen Selena]

Wonderful picture. So cool :) Short and meaningful. Great job :)

[Infinite hexes]

Excellent presentation!