Sounds of Winter

 

 

Bitter cold nostalgia

Keeps me awake - I need this memory to fade.

So like the frost that bites at the skin,

Forever my bruised heart is broken.

 

There was no light in your blue eyes,

When the fires of desire that warmed us

Burned the colors of my world into ashes

Remains of black and grey.

 

I write away the pain you've caused,

As I revel in the sounds of winter.

The brutal silence that came from your lips,

Frozen within my thoughts.

 

Author's Note

Winter by ~WielkiBoo

Reviews

[Renée]

Season, imagery, story touches me deeply

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

AnnaRose, The use of winter imagery mingling in with the imagery of lost love was remarkable!

[Enid Blake]

Reflections of a cold winter... works well :)

[MachinaWriter]

Beautiful write, as always. Its amazing how seasons come with emotional and often relationship associations. It goes to show that all the emotions and moments in our life come and shift and change and go just like the seasons of the world. Eventually the iciness of winter will spring forth with new hope, before a summer of new love and experience. Be prepared, for there is always the chance that it will Fall again. A lovely poem, with great imagery. As always, I'm a fan. Keep writing ^^

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Good write...i could feel the iciness...good write...

[MandaBear]

Very dark side to winter. Good poem thought its nice to see different sides of seasons

[Heromen Selena]

Woah.... I got chills at the end. Very nicely done! I love winter, but this shows the ugly side of it. Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and amazing poetry. Cold nostalgia allowed us to rebirth pain and loss. Great description open the door to vision of cold and sadness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tarry Franck]

Very well conveyed, your pain. Excellence piece.

[Tomi]

Painfully beautiful! welldone!