#1 Crush

A twisted look at being obsessed with a crush. Partially inspired by Garbage's #1 Crush.

Dreaming once again --almost helpless,

I hold close the bittersweet image.

Your tender and devilish smile,

Locked tightly within my memory.

 

I have watched you closely,

Stalking you within the dark shadows

Waiting for the chance to grab your heart

An oppurtunity to make you mine.

 

Hypnotized, the master of my heart

Violation of my love I've been yearning

Pushing me away with every intention

To bring me back into your twisted embrace.

 

I have become an open book to you,

Unable to resist your jaded gaze

And give up my broken tattered soul

Sell it to the Devil just to have you near.

 

I can feel deep within my soul,

As I try to convince you - we are the same.

Free falling into your perverted games

Fingering the crevice of my thoughts.

 

Willing to die under your spell,

Tearing apart everything that's left of me.

One day you will finally understand, my love

You will always be my number one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good music and amazing poetry. Some crushes can leave us weak and alone with our desire. I like the flow of thoughts and how you ended the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Nice poem

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sounds familiar .. Been there .... I have tried to distract myself with other Men, but my thoughts, and desires always come back to "This One" .. .. I know he knows I am crazy bout Him ..lol .. So kinda hurts, even at my advanced age ...lol ... sigh .......

I hear you .. Jazz :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

There is a fine line between caring and obsessing, very nicely penned.

[Pratik]

You portray a truth that haunts so many lovers out there.. they have their emotions used and thrown away like paper napkins... Your poem depicts their pain in all its dimensions.. A good write indeed!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

captures the essence of a crush...good write....

[Ruth]

Captures the issue so well!
Had me pinned to my seat! lol
Awesome hon
xoxo