#1 Crush

A twisted look at being obsessed with a crush. Partially inspired by Garbage's #1 Crush.

Dreaming once again --almost helpless,

I hold close the bittersweet image.

Your tender and devilish smile,

Locked tightly within my memory.

 

I have watched you closely,

Stalking you within the dark shadows

Waiting for the chance to grab your heart

An oppurtunity to make you mine.

 

Hypnotized, the master of my heart

Violation of my love I've been yearning

Pushing me away with every intention

To bring me back into your twisted embrace.

 

I have become an open book to you,

Unable to resist your jaded gaze

And give up my broken tattered soul

Sell it to the Devil just to have you near.

 

I can feel deep within my soul,

As I try to convince you - we are the same.

Free falling into your perverted games

Fingering the crevice of my thoughts.

 

Willing to die under your spell,

Tearing apart everything that's left of me.

One day you will finally understand, my love

You will always be my number one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[KAREN]

The poem flowed flawlessly, and it leaves me in awe.

[Callista-Jade]

I really adore your pieces. Love that 4th stanza.

[Fate]

beautiful!..i just love this one...
your great!..really.

[Renée]

Woah crush is just a sweet thing I thought... yeah that sounds more like obsession !

[MandaBear]

I suppose we all get this way sometimes or deny it even though it is totally true. Great job love the imagery! 100%

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

truly excellent......especially this line;;;;;;;And give up my broken tattered soul Sell it to the Devil just to have you near.

[Sam Gregory]

This is pretty good, some good use of imagery.Well written and well expressed. A good read :)

[Lily Mae]

"Free falling into your perverted games
Fingering the crevice of my thoughts."

Wow.. seems lame but you blow me away with your excellent word play. I need to read you alot more often so kick me now and again when I get lame lol..xo Excellent write..xo

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Thank you lily :)

[Tarry Franck]

I agree with Jasmine - this rings true for me !!! Great write - thank you for sharing - it's like we are experiencing the same! Thanks for sharing :)

[An owl on the moon]

Could sense this powerful, unyielding yearning... the longing to embrace even death for the desire... How I have let myself be submersed into such a sensual spell... the aching is overwhelming... You confess it so well...