Stay

Love - here in an instant, gone in a flash.

 

 

 

Lay with me and dream,

Forget about the world around us.

Waves crashing to the beats,

Our yearning hearts for eternity.

 

Enter universal imaginations,

Our eyes sparkle like the stars.

A burning lust of forbidden ecstasy,

Love lingering upon the ocean breeze.

 

Lock away our tomorrow's,

Bury them beneath the sand.

Say you will never leave my side,

Stay, even if it's just for one night.

Reviews

[Renée]

The first line made me catch my breath .... beautiful !

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Perfect flow, metrica and structure, full of pathos in its simplicity, LOVED it ! That's the kind of poem I love reading, going to share it on facebook right now ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful description led reader to a good place. In good dreams we never lose and love is forever. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. One night is better then none. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Ink Angel]

Great write very serene ,relaxed almost feel myself sinking in the sand

[Enid Blake]

Both serene and yet intense...

[Heromen Selena]

Pressured time is the worst thing to have. The evident ending always pressed on us. Great job with the poem and the picture is lovely.

[Tarry Franck]

Lock away our tomorrow's,
Bury them beneath the sand.

Love this - Loved the whole poem - it's beautiful - but this struck home with me ~ Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!!

[EternityWolf101]

"Say you will never leave my side,
Stay, even if it's just for one night."

Beautiful part of the poem. Love it to bits.

[Raven Starhawk]

Soothing. When I read this it had a soothing effect and at the same time a need for someone to share moments together...>.< I have a headache and can't quite think right, but I still enjoyed this.

[Tomi]

Clear, tranquil...peacful, love..Poetry..BEAUTIFUL!